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Zeiram

I'm reposting all of Shoken's Adventures for those people that started reading it but might not have finished it before the old forums went down. Since I have to open up the documents once again I've decided to make what ever changes I can to make things better. I should also mention that most of the spelling errors I made might not have made it into my saved documents, but I'm hoping to catch them as I do this minor revision.

Anyone that catches something I missed can feel free to post it here along with any comments and critism that folks might have. And of course I don't mind folks linking this to other forums at all. I figure the more people that read it the better. Happy Reading all, I hope to entertain you if only for a little while.

Chakekik

yes Shokens is up! As with most stories I find on this board, this story is rediculously good!

cant wait for more Z.

Zeiram

I figured it was time for an update for folks. The reason I haven't gotten more chapters revised and posted is I've been sick for the past week. I'm hoping I can get caught up some with this 14+ hour patch that SOE is going to do late monday night.

Also, as always I'm sure I've missed some grammar errors and mispelled a word here. If anyone finds any just let me know and I'll go back and correct them.

Zeiram

I've added more to chapter 9 than I had in the past, I'm hoping that its at least a small improvement on it.

In any case I'd like to hear from folks and know if it was an improvement or just the addition of useless words.

Zeiram

I know I didn't do much editing or additions to chapter 10, with some luck I'll be able to go back and add more to it later. Right now I'm just hoping that the closer I get to current the easier it is going to be for me to edit and get chapters posted.

I'm looking forward to getting on to the next story and finishing it.

Ddemons

I was bored, and clicked on the first thing I saw
And then read the entire story
Love it.
Then again, I love anything where two personalities are in the same body, and they kill people by ripping people apart / blowing them up
<_<

Chakekik

Z, your a sick writer man, loving the story as always...

keep em coming.

Zeiram

I'm glad to hear that people are still finding and reading it. I haven't had much of a chance to post revised chapters, but I'm hoping I can change that soon. I want to get working on Misadventures and finish it, hopefully before another year passes me by.

Edit: So far I've added up to 13, hopefully the rest will be reposted and revised within a months time.

Chakekik

cant wait for more

keep it up man.

Zeiram

I've now finished posting everything that I have for Shoken's Adventures. I want to thank the people that asked me how I was doing when I went into a writing slump when I started slacking off.

I'd like to hear from everyone that took the time to read Shoken's Adventures. So please if you read it and enjoyed it leave a comment. I'm curious to find out how many people enjoyed this since I started writing this story in December of 2001.

Cloud

Just finished reading it, was awesome.

I'm gonna go "persuade" those dweebs at SoE to let you publish it, what do you reckon will be more effective... Beating them to a pulp, or ripping up their comic book collections? Razz

Zeiram

Thanks for reading it Cloud, unfortunately I doubt SOE would budge even if they were beaten about the head with a lead pipe or a blackjack. Like any other person that writes I wished I could see my work printed as a book, but seeing comments from people that have enjoyed it is just as good.